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nathan82 | 16 years ago

Great landing page, initially I was clicking around trying to figure out why such a slick looking tool was completely free! You really get across how and why your service would be useful.

A few little nitpicks, hopefully they're helpful: The bottom signup button isn't clickable. The orange 'join today' text could maybe do with a nicer font - more handwritten, less script. There's a small white square in the top right of your stock photo. Cutout outline visible on the woman's hair. The screenshots might be better popping up in a lightbox. The sign-up form struck me as generic, and didn't match the page I had just come from. The site root doesn't show my dashboard when I'm logged in. The icons next to the different types of entries look like youtube 'play' buttons, confused me for a moment.

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dmix|16 years ago

Nitpicking is welcome, this is the type of feedback we don't get from our usual users - appreciate it.

nathan82|16 years ago

Glad to help, a couple more before I go back to obsessing over my own pixels...

The vertical spacing between the green headings could do with tweaking, more space above and less below to tie them to the block of text they go with. Top headline text "Keeping tabs..." has the dots of the i's and the left edge of the 'g' sliced off. Your logo is nice but the wordmark looks (to me) very corporate and squashed up; maybe incorporate some blues from the logo and use looser kerning.