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nathan82 | 16 years ago

Glad to help, a couple more before I go back to obsessing over my own pixels...

The vertical spacing between the green headings could do with tweaking, more space above and less below to tie them to the block of text they go with. Top headline text "Keeping tabs..." has the dots of the i's and the left edge of the 'g' sliced off. Your logo is nice but the wordmark looks (to me) very corporate and squashed up; maybe incorporate some blues from the logo and use looser kerning.

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