[cant_kant]

Interesting stories. Better copy editing would make them easier to read.

"Ed had shouted on them like this"

"No real kidnapper hauls around a struggling, scream-seeking captive"

"I see I need to show the adolescent asshole affecting to be me "

Broken sentences like these make the stories a bit of a chore to read.

[mojoe]

Thanks for the feedback! We hired a professional copy editor, but we will work harder in this area going forward.