Your daughter's awesome! She's going places. But you already knew that :) And you're awesome too for encouraging her by sharing her work and helping her with it.
I don't have feedback on the game so I'll just recommend a book which I think is readable for a 12 year old (I'd also recommend it to anyone here): "A Theory of Fun for Game Design" (https://www.theoryoffun.com). It's a great introduction to game design and it's full of fun cartoons.
This is really impressive for any novice game developer with no regards for their age.
Some feedback after playing for a few minutes:
It seems the game mechanics only allows the "critical path" of advancing. By that I mean the only actions that generate a reaction are the ones that advance the plot (with the exception of moving between rooms and hints). This also causes some frustration as I basically just try to click on everything and mostly nothing happens and I ask myself if I'm doing something wrong.
I would suggest adding a click-to-describe layer. So for example clicking on a character would say something about him/her (Maybe objectively, maybe subjectively from the player's pov), clicking on an item, even one that I don't need to interact with, says something about it. etc.
This is very common in adventure games and is a great way to add lay down the story element for the game while at the same time provide the player with some interaction while looking for the actual solution to the current step.
Nice data structure. No classes, just objects. Which makes it faster to iterate. Feedback: Throw in a bunch of throw's for sanity checks like if(!room) throw new Error("room=" + room + " window.location.hash=" + window.location.hash); It will help keep your sanity. And you will get rid of an if(room) which will flatten the code, and less code paths are also good for sanity. Smart using the url hash to store state btw.
And use colors! Start with fill colors, then progress into using colors for everything. Dad: Get her a digital painting board.
Small suggestion: If items were intentionally made not to look like clickable, it's fine. Otherwise, a simple 'cursor: pointer' on doors and items would be better in my opinion.
Nevertheless, it's a wonderful piece of art. Your daughter has a promising future.
Seems very macabre for a 12 year old mind. There's a consistent, creepy mood throughout all the screens that I saw, and I think it's very well done. The quality of the artwork / art direction is impressive.
In terms of playability, I managed to pick up nails, and I tried to use them on all five characters I could find but nothing seemed to work.
Hey OP, how did you feel when your 12 year old said she wanted to make a game that starts with the phrase "Aaron deserves to die"? Some people would be concerned, but clearly you've been very supportive of the endeavor.
Yes, I agree, it's a dark game. Luckily, my mother is a psychologist and helped clarify to me what it's all about for my daughter, and why I shouldn't be concerned.
Also her art style is already changing again and the next game will be something completely different.
After you stab the girl in the back of the head with the knife, the knife magically finds its way back to the kitchen.
When you get to the TV color photo thing in the locked room, you can't click on the Exit button. (It just flips to the "That's too bad" graphic). I assume this is the end? It's hard to tell.
Not necessarily a bug, just a question, it seems like there's no way to use more than one inventory slot by collecting items in advance of needing them. I'm only able to get the first item, use it, then get the next item, then use it, etc. Is that intentional?
I think it might be necessary to preload the game resources, otherwise the game becomes unplayable on a slow connection with a round-trip > 500 ms (and I guess the server is under heavy load right now). Well, not exactly unplayable, I ended up just looking at the filenames in the requests that were sent to get a feeling for what was happening.
Well done!
EDIT: I noticed that there are 'pills' in the list of items, but none of the rooms has them. Should have taken your pills, Nathan!
First off, this is wonderful. I have a 2 year old daughter. A little too young to be coding but I look forward to seeing if she gets into it. The art is pretty great too.
My only feedback, it really needs UI states. Like when you hover over a button or an item in the room that an action can be taken on. Otherwise it is too hard to figure out what is clickable and what is not and it becomes a random clicking game.
I still do not know how I got out of the first room except through random clicking.
Very cool. I finally beat the game, although I did need to look at the source code. The most confusing thing to me was that you need to find the items in order. I kept clicking on the knife wondering why it wasn't going into my inventory.
Also found a few cheats :P (#locked_room).
Seriously though this is really impressive and I love the art work... it really felt like I was in those classic red room games from a decade+ (!!!) ago
All I can do is click on most of the doors, pick up the nails, and click on the hint. Nothing else seems to be interactive. Anyone have a hint on anything else that should be clickable?
EDIT:
Figured it out. What a brilliantly designed game....course now I'll have nightmares. That final screen....Well played.
Great art & concept. Tech feedback wise: I'm getting an odd ~2 second delay whenever I click something which is making it bit difficult since it's a point and click adventure - might simply be the server that's mildly overloaded; you could put it behind cloudflare?
As an adventure game lover, I think this is a great little game! I love dark, macabre adventure games and I'm really digging the art style here. The mood is very consistent and the creepiness really comes across. Your daughter has done a great job!
Cool little game! Loving the art and the morbid story. It was tough as nails
One nitpick: sometimes the game would seem to get unresponsive if I clicked the little hint door (it'd get stuck halfway open). Only spamclicking around for a while got me out of it
Really loving the art style. I'm also impressed with the code quality. Way above what I would expect a 12 year old would be capable of. I've seen college students that would struggle with something like this. Keep it up, kid!
Did she draw everything by herself? That is amazing. I wish I could draw like that. On second day of 2018, I’m already jealous of a 12 year old accomplishing more than me :(
This was such a cool little game! I agree with the comment that assets should be preloaded. For some reason the only item image that ever showed up in my inventory was the nails. I spent a really long time looking for the bucket only to realize that I had it already and could use it on the plant. None of the other items after that appeared in my inventory, but I just trusted they were there and was able to proceed through the rest of the game. I had to look at the source code for help, but I was super impressed by the clarity of the code there too. Nicely done!
[+] [-] scrollaway|8 years ago|reply
I don't have feedback on the game so I'll just recommend a book which I think is readable for a 12 year old (I'd also recommend it to anyone here): "A Theory of Fun for Game Design" (https://www.theoryoffun.com). It's a great introduction to game design and it's full of fun cartoons.
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Some feedback after playing for a few minutes: It seems the game mechanics only allows the "critical path" of advancing. By that I mean the only actions that generate a reaction are the ones that advance the plot (with the exception of moving between rooms and hints). This also causes some frustration as I basically just try to click on everything and mostly nothing happens and I ask myself if I'm doing something wrong.
I would suggest adding a click-to-describe layer. So for example clicking on a character would say something about him/her (Maybe objectively, maybe subjectively from the player's pov), clicking on an item, even one that I don't need to interact with, says something about it. etc.
This is very common in adventure games and is a great way to add lay down the story element for the game while at the same time provide the player with some interaction while looking for the actual solution to the current step.
But again, really really great.
[+] [-] sireat|8 years ago|reply
I spent 5 minutes navigating rooms and mindlessly clicking and nothing happening until picking up one object and finally using it to solve the riddle.
Any red herrings?
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[+] [-] 8x8squares|8 years ago|reply
Small suggestion: If items were intentionally made not to look like clickable, it's fine. Otherwise, a simple 'cursor: pointer' on doors and items would be better in my opinion.
Nevertheless, it's a wonderful piece of art. Your daughter has a promising future.
[+] [-] david927|8 years ago|reply
She says the items were intentionally made not to look clickable to make the game more challenging.
[+] [-] tejohnso|8 years ago|reply
In terms of playability, I managed to pick up nails, and I tried to use them on all five characters I could find but nothing seemed to work.
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[+] [-] david927|8 years ago|reply
Also her art style is already changing again and the next game will be something completely different.
[+] [-] BugsJustFindMe|8 years ago|reply
After you stab the girl in the back of the head with the knife, the knife magically finds its way back to the kitchen.
When you get to the TV color photo thing in the locked room, you can't click on the Exit button. (It just flips to the "That's too bad" graphic). I assume this is the end? It's hard to tell.
Not necessarily a bug, just a question, it seems like there's no way to use more than one inventory slot by collecting items in advance of needing them. I'm only able to get the first item, use it, then get the next item, then use it, etc. Is that intentional?
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[+] [-] muzani|8 years ago|reply
A lot of my game making friends from that group became millionaire game developers by 30.
I didn't really accomplish much besides cutting my teeth doing project management, debugging, learning the horrors of waterfall.
I would love to see the new generation continue this.
[+] [-] kalleboo|8 years ago|reply
What tools are kids using these days to make point-and-click style games like this?
[+] [-] yorwba|8 years ago|reply
Well done!
EDIT: I noticed that there are 'pills' in the list of items, but none of the rooms has them. Should have taken your pills, Nathan!
[+] [-] david927|8 years ago|reply
She said this was her favorite comment. It had her on the floor laughing!
[+] [-] throwaway2016a|8 years ago|reply
My only feedback, it really needs UI states. Like when you hover over a button or an item in the room that an action can be taken on. Otherwise it is too hard to figure out what is clickable and what is not and it becomes a random clicking game.
I still do not know how I got out of the first room except through random clicking.
Edit: ahhh... it's a vent.
[+] [-] chatmasta|8 years ago|reply
Also found a few cheats :P (#locked_room).
Seriously though this is really impressive and I love the art work... it really felt like I was in those classic red room games from a decade+ (!!!) ago
[+] [-] zachlatta|8 years ago|reply
12 years old or not, this was the highlight of my evening.
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[+] [-] merpnderp|8 years ago|reply
EDIT: Figured it out. What a brilliantly designed game....course now I'll have nightmares. That final screen....Well played.
[+] [-] singularity2001|8 years ago|reply
I feel so dumb. there's nothing I can do in this game. so frustrating. HELP!
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[+] [-] dan_mctree|8 years ago|reply
One nitpick: sometimes the game would seem to get unresponsive if I clicked the little hint door (it'd get stuck halfway open). Only spamclicking around for a while got me out of it
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