[dbustac]

I suggest you read this essay

https://ellenrhymes.com/paul-graham/

The author of the essay is a writing coach, too. But working with her might be a little bit expensive. Especially if you are just starting out.

I’m willing to help you for free if you want me to. I’ve been blogging for the last couple months at https://danielbusta.com/

[VirenM]

Tried checking out your writing, but it seems like your websites down. If you're extending your generosity to other commenters, I'd love to take you up on the offer :)