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600frogs | 4 years ago

Some unsolicited advice for you:

* That initial "How to use it" diagram completely puts me off the product - it seems dizzyingly complex, and to have that right at the top before I even know what the product is seems like a mistake.

* Consider getting a native speaker to review the text - the grammar is off in a fair few places.

* Write a simpler paragraph for what your product does - I've read through the entire landing page, and your HN comment, and I still don't understand what it is you are selling.

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