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psychometry | 4 years ago

The only character in the first book who exhibited any kind of personality was the gruff cop who swears, doesn't care if he's not allowed to smoke inside, and takes no shit from anyone. It's almost laughable how bad the author is at characterization.

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Hoasi|4 years ago

> It's almost laughable how bad the author is at characterization.

Isn't that part of the charm of the book, though?

The characters are not as strong individually as they could be, but that fits the society they find themselves in.

psychometry|4 years ago

No, I don't think there's an excuse for anyone writing this badly.