I would much prefer this story being written by a real friend of the protagonist. Everyone else knew but me" and proceeds to do an analysis. Rather nosy and self-confident the author. Opinions from afar are not very useful. "Some were dumb, some were smart" oh really, wow, what an insight! This guy is piggy-backing on the death of a person he once met a few times. Go and get some real friend, and then write about them. pfft.
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