[buyx]

The Afrikaans version may be comprehensible to a Dutch speaker, but the Dutch version, even the version you posted, is still very hard for this (second-language) Afrikaans reader to understand.

[sverhagen]

Thank you for that insight, which, thanks to my ignorance, is surprising!

[Ballas]

As a first language Afrikaans speaker, both sentences are perhaps somewhat difficult to parse, but also very readable to my eyes.