[epoch_100]

Heh. That's not very nice. If it feels stilted, that's probably because I wrote this primarily to be spoken. But ChatGPT was not involved.

[version_five]

I read it and I'm pretty much the most critical person I know, I didn't see any problem with the style, I don't know what that guy's talking about.

[danielvf]

Yeah, don't worry about the above complaint. The writing is just fine.