The content here seems great, but for some reason I find the prose difficult to follow. Maybe I'm just too tired? Some sentences are oddly phrased and I have to keep backing up to re-read them.
Yeah, sorry for that. I spent more time on technical side of article rather than polishing grammar and picking right words. As for non-native speaker it is hard for me to construct sentencies that match natural English speech.
Your grammar and style are great. This isn't a novel, it's highly technical material about concepts that are difficult, very detailed, and unfamiliar to most readers. It's okay if people have to re-read stuff.
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