[cstross]

Please can you add a big bold warning right at the top of your article? As it is, the safety details are buried way too deep for casual readers who might be skim-reading by the time they get to it. Even a "heads up: this stuff can injure or blind you permanently if you don't follow safety procedures!" in the first paragraph would help.

[jacquesm]

Hey Charles, yes, I will do that. In fact as more and more feedback rolled in I realized that I should really lead the whole thing with a safety section, I will do some rewriting tonight.

[IgorPartola]

A maker space I used to be a part of had a warning on our laser that said “DO NOT LOOK AT THE LASER BEAM WITH THE REMAINING EYE!” I feel like this should be the first sentence here.

[jacquesm]

It's in there already, even if not as the first sentence, but your plan is a good one.

[jacquesm]

Ok, the rewritten article is up, if you have any feedback I'd be most grateful.