[WhosGhostin]

> Then towards the end, you're asking for more information, and the short-attention-span readers have forgotten your original call to action

This makes a lot of sense. I also Thank You for suggesting how I could have done better so I upvoted you as well - I made this comment because it might feel like I was disagreeing with you, but I was really challenging you with an alternate POV and clarifying my own thought process