[Loveaway]

RIP my friend. Good thing you found the energy to warn us before dieing. By the way, your first sentence is missing a verb. Your second sentence is missing the word "way". Your third sentence should end with a period and the first word should be capitalized. I hope you can still use your last breaths to correct these mistakes. We must give our everything to avoid further casulties in future generations.

[permo-w]

it's not about mistakes, it's about style over substance

[holoduke]

Is dieing a correct word? Should it not be dying? :)

[phanimahesh]

Nit: casualties

[nodoodles]

It's "R.I.P.", not "RIP".