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mo_42 | 1 year ago
For prose, replace all common adjectives by more specific or descriptive one, or even remove them too and describe properties. For example: The F-35 passed by my house. When I heard its sound, the jet had already disappeared at the horizon. (This describes super-sonic speed without an adjective or an overly precise speed number.)
Edit: past perfect based on comment
loloquwowndueo|1 year ago
Same applies to the article - it’s riddled with grammar mistakes. “Lot of your readers may not have English as their first language.”
“test platform that let’s anyone run”
ggambetta|1 year ago