[davidclark]

> Let's unpack that a bit.

I’m not accusing you of anything, just giving the feedback that this line makes your post sound like it is AI slop. This is an extremely typical phrase when you prompt any current AI with some variation of “explain this post”. Honestly, the verbosity of the rest of your post also reinforces this signal. The typo here also indicates cutting and pasting things together “Given what he has to say about . But more importantly,”

If it is not AI slop, then hopefully you can use this feedback for future writing.

[jsnell]

All written by hand, and you can check the style against thousands of posts I've made on HN over almost two decades.

(I explained the issue briefly in the first paragraph, but the article is 15k words. Hard to convincingly rebut that without the details.)

But thanks for the superficial style feedback and ignoring the substance.

[GaryNumanVevo]

Please don't do this here, it's easy enough for you to see their comment history. Believe it or not, people still care about writing comments on HN in an informative and engaging manner.