top | item 45377088 (no title) bre1010 | 5 months ago You would just say "improving efficiency". Whereas theirs is like: "Improving the efficiency [... of what?]" discuss order hn newest codazoda|5 months ago You left out words at the front that are important.“deliver better quality while also improving the efficiency.”Reads fine to me. An editor would likely drop “the”.
codazoda|5 months ago You left out words at the front that are important.“deliver better quality while also improving the efficiency.”Reads fine to me. An editor would likely drop “the”.
codazoda|5 months ago
“deliver better quality while also improving the efficiency.”
Reads fine to me. An editor would likely drop “the”.