[thornewolf]

This was well written. I'm glad that I powered through the initial hesitation I felt when I recognized the narrative style.

[alphazard]

Can you elaborate? I also feel like I've heard this particular voice before, but I can't recall where.

[jimmygrapes]

I may be imagining it but it's very reminiscent of "Scott Alexander" / Slate Star Codex / whatever he rebranded to

[svoit]

It brought to mind Edward Norton's narration in Fight Club.

[cturner]

Microserfs?