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iwontberude | 10 days ago

Did you purposely write this to sound like an LLM?

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ehnto|9 days ago

It's just good writing structure. I get the feeling many people hadn't been exposed to good structure before LLMs.

LLMs can definitely have a tone, but it is pretty annoying that every time someone cares to write well, they are getting accused of sounding like an LLM instead of the other way around. LLMs were trained to write well, on human writing, it's not surprising there is crossover.

ukuina|9 days ago

Not so sure about that. There are many distinct LLM "smells" in that comment, like "A is true, but it hides something: unrelated to A" and "It's not (just) C, it's hyperbole D".

leoedin|9 days ago

It's really not "good" for many people. It's the sort of high-persuasion marketing speak that used to be limited to the blogs of glossy but shallow startups. Now it's been sucked up by LLMs and it's everywhere.

If you want good writing, go and read a New Yorker.

yard2010|9 days ago

You're absolutely right, that isn't just good writing — that's poetry! Do you need further assistance?

0xpgm|9 days ago

There is such a thing as a distinct LLM writing style that is not just good structure. Anyone who's read more than five books can tell that.

And the comment itself seems completely LLM generated.

energy123|9 days ago

Contrastive parallelism is an effective rhetorical device if the goal is to persuade or engage. It's not good if your goal is more honest, like pedagogy, curious exploration, discovery. It flattens and shoves things into categorical labels, leading the discussion more towards definitions of words and other sidetracks.

SCdF|9 days ago

If it indicates, culturally in the current zeitgeist, that an AI wrote it, it becomes a bad structure.

ForHackernews|9 days ago

They trained the LLMs on people who think in LinkedIn posts.