Neither is Vonnegut's (which your short, choppy sentences reminded me of), but he was a very successful and beloved author. I'm in no way comparing myself to Vonnegut, but my point is just because it doesn't appeal to you, it doesn't mean it isn't good.
Writing is art. Does it get the intended point across? Does it resonate with the reader? Does it make them feel something? Then it is good.
grey-area|3 days ago
sgarland|3 days ago
Writing is art. Does it get the intended point across? Does it resonate with the reader? Does it make them feel something? Then it is good.
quotemstr|3 days ago
watwut|3 days ago
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