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sgarland | 3 days ago

As someone who thinks very much like TFA, I often write like that. I swear I'm not a bot.

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grey-area|3 days ago

Maybe fix your writing then. This is not good writing.

sgarland|3 days ago

Neither is Vonnegut's (which your short, choppy sentences reminded me of), but he was a very successful and beloved author. I'm in no way comparing myself to Vonnegut, but my point is just because it doesn't appeal to you, it doesn't mean it isn't good.

Writing is art. Does it get the intended point across? Does it resonate with the reader? Does it make them feel something? Then it is good.

quotemstr|3 days ago

It used to be. That's why LLMs adopted it. How do you think they got their preferences? A Magic 8 Ball?

watwut|3 days ago

Why is it bad writing?