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jrflowers | 9 hours ago
This is not prose, it is exposition. It is perfectly valid to critique any expository essay, especially one of this length, for its density (or lack thereof) of substantive information.
jrflowers | 9 hours ago
This is not prose, it is exposition. It is perfectly valid to critique any expository essay, especially one of this length, for its density (or lack thereof) of substantive information.
pavo-etc|9 hours ago
A person writing an essay on their own site doesn't need to have the information density of bus timetable.
bendmorris|5 hours ago
mirawelner|9 hours ago
But this seemed like it bridges the gap between prose and an expository essay -it was doing both.
jrflowers|8 hours ago
Putting prose in an essay means there are more valid criticisms of a piece of writing, not fewer. If somebody is breakdancing and reciting the periodic table at the same time it’s ok if somebody notices if they skipped the lanthanides and actinides.
I’m a fan of blending the two! It’s just really really hard to do both well at the same time. My most recent example is Malcolm Harris’ history of Palo Alto, it is incredibly well-done.