Looks nice, but the text reads as if it was written by a non-native speaker of English, or at least someone who is not really sensitive to the nuances of the language. I suggest you run the site past a few people who are sensitive.
A few quick thoughts:
(1) A comma is not a clause separator.
Life is complicated.
We made dating simple.
(2) Actually, I think "We make dating simple" sounds better.
Nice looking website, but don't you think it's a bit weird to use a LinkedIn profile for dating? LinkedIn is like the one place on the internet where you have to act professional. I don't even like it when my personal life overlaps with LinkedIn so I Can't even begin to imagine myself feeling comfortable using it for dating.
Thanks :) LinkedIn is just an authentication mechanism for us make sure that the user is a working professional. We don't post anything on your LinkedIn profile.
[+] [-] ggchappell|13 years ago|reply
A few quick thoughts:
(1) A comma is not a clause separator.
Life is complicated.
We made dating simple.
(2) Actually, I think "We make dating simple" sounds better.
(3) Truffle accesses, not access.
(4) "Folks" sounds a little odd to me.
[+] [-] pacifi30|13 years ago|reply
[+] [-] jart|13 years ago|reply
[+] [-] pacifi30|13 years ago|reply
[+] [-] pacifi30|13 years ago|reply