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Review our launching soon page please.

5 points| rameshnid | 12 years ago |lurnq.com | reply

LurnQs take on the entire MOOC phenomenon. What if courses went social?

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[+] sgaither|12 years ago|reply
The page looks nice and you have a clear flow and call to action...but the copy could use tightening up all around. For example, the subhead:

> New, exciting way of doing online courses

Sounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"

And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"

There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression

[+] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply
Thanks a lot. We are based out of India and most of us can speak english but have terrible grammar. But I will get it corrected.
[+] gearoidoc|12 years ago|reply
Apart from the name (is it pronounced "Lurnk"?) I think its a good job. You explain what it is you do in the header and then request an email address - can't ask for more in a premarketing site.

Good job dude.

[+] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply
Thanks, Its pronounced - 'Learn'-'cue'.
[+] looper42|12 years ago|reply
Page looks very nice. Interested in what kind of courses will be coming here. It would be great if you could put some up coming courses.
[+] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply
Yep. Will add that info to the page. Will be very relevant.
[+] piratebroadcast|12 years ago|reply
Too much orange text, makes my eye jump all over the screen looking for the important text.
[+] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply
Will choose a milder color. Thanks for the feedback.