top | item 5976817 Review our launching soon page please. 5 points| rameshnid | 12 years ago |lurnq.com | reply LurnQs take on the entire MOOC phenomenon. What if courses went social? 11 comments order hn newest [+] [-] sgaither|12 years ago|reply The page looks nice and you have a clear flow and call to action...but the copy could use tightening up all around. For example, the subhead:> New, exciting way of doing online coursesSounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression [+] [-] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply Thanks a lot. We are based out of India and most of us can speak english but have terrible grammar. But I will get it corrected. [+] [-] gearoidoc|12 years ago|reply Apart from the name (is it pronounced "Lurnk"?) I think its a good job. You explain what it is you do in the header and then request an email address - can't ask for more in a premarketing site.Good job dude. [+] [-] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply Thanks, Its pronounced - 'Learn'-'cue'. load replies (1) [+] [-] looper42|12 years ago|reply Page looks very nice. Interested in what kind of courses will be coming here. It would be great if you could put some up coming courses. [+] [-] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply Yep. Will add that info to the page. Will be very relevant. [+] [-] piratebroadcast|12 years ago|reply Too much orange text, makes my eye jump all over the screen looking for the important text. [+] [-] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply Will choose a milder color. Thanks for the feedback.
[+] [-] sgaither|12 years ago|reply The page looks nice and you have a clear flow and call to action...but the copy could use tightening up all around. For example, the subhead:> New, exciting way of doing online coursesSounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression [+] [-] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply Thanks a lot. We are based out of India and most of us can speak english but have terrible grammar. But I will get it corrected.
[+] [-] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply Thanks a lot. We are based out of India and most of us can speak english but have terrible grammar. But I will get it corrected.
[+] [-] gearoidoc|12 years ago|reply Apart from the name (is it pronounced "Lurnk"?) I think its a good job. You explain what it is you do in the header and then request an email address - can't ask for more in a premarketing site.Good job dude. [+] [-] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply Thanks, Its pronounced - 'Learn'-'cue'. load replies (1)
[+] [-] looper42|12 years ago|reply Page looks very nice. Interested in what kind of courses will be coming here. It would be great if you could put some up coming courses. [+] [-] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply Yep. Will add that info to the page. Will be very relevant.
[+] [-] piratebroadcast|12 years ago|reply Too much orange text, makes my eye jump all over the screen looking for the important text. [+] [-] rameshnid|12 years ago|reply Will choose a milder color. Thanks for the feedback.
[+] [-] sgaither|12 years ago|reply
> New, exciting way of doing online courses
Sounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"
And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"
There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression
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[+] [-] gearoidoc|12 years ago|reply
Good job dude.
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