top | item 7507225 (no title) panacea | 12 years ago What do you mean by 'it doesn't scan well'? discuss order hn newest vacri|12 years ago The flow of the paragraph isn't fluid. One concept doesn't flow into the next concept and/or it reads awkwardly.
vacri|12 years ago The flow of the paragraph isn't fluid. One concept doesn't flow into the next concept and/or it reads awkwardly.
vacri|12 years ago