[sadache]

Thanks for the valuable feedback. Here is a question, do you think the following explains well the product?

"prismic.io is a different approach to content management. It features a Writing Room for content writers to author and manage content, and a Content Query Api for developers to integrate managed content into any website or app."

[sunir]

Again, please spell API correctly. It's an acronym, not a word.

Second, your jargon is for yourselves. You need to speak in the language of your customers.

1. What is a Writing Room?

2. What is a Content Query API?

3. What is managed content?

Third, don't advertise your writing. "prismic.io is a different approach to content management" should be obvious and left unstated.

By the way, this customer testimonial is not helping you. I already feel exhausted thinking about how much work it will be to use you. http://www.elastic.io/blog/82796857416/why-we-chose-api-base...

I think the idea is that you expose the content through an API which can be inserted anywhere.

Prismic.io, an API for content.

Prismic.io is a content management system that only publishes through an API. Let your writers focus on writing and your developers and designers can focus on layout.

[mojobot]

"It features a Writing Room for content writers to author and manage content"

I don't know why I'm supposed to want a Writing Room. What makes it more desirable than the post entry pages I'm used to? I think a brief explanation of what value the Writing Room adds would be helpful.

"a Content Query Api for developers to integrate managed content into any website or app."

This should be another sentence and may not be considered a feature depending on who your target is. Also, "integrate managed content" is a little hard to understand. Maybe "embed content" instead.

[username223]

I still have no idea what you're doing. Are you trying to be a middle-man between writers and content farms?