Ask HN: Please review my app onesmallpage
http://onesmallpage.appspot.com
Basically the site came out of the idea that I do a lot of reading every day, but most of it isn't reading great books. I read my email, Facebook, Twitter, and a host of other websites every day and I thought that if I could channel at least a little bit of that reading into book reading I would be a more productive and well-rounded person.
Right now I'm pulling about 100 out-of-copyright books from Project Gutenberg for you to choose from. If the site gets popular I plan to add the entire catalog.
The way it works is you find a book that you want to read, enter your email, and we will send you up to 5 pages of that book a day.
Thanks for any feedback! Dan
[+] [-] komlenic|15 years ago|reply
I didn't sign up to test, but if you're not doing so already, I'd definitely think about including some links/settings right in the emails that allow users to: adjust # of pages, etc... maybe even a "I don't really like this book, suggest something else" kind-of functionality.
Good luck!
[+] [-] dshipper|15 years ago|reply
[+] [-] johnhok|15 years ago|reply
I think it's because you have two images and one is a screenshot of an email inbox. I think this may be confusing because the headings you have on them aren't quite visible at first glance. My suggestion would be to make it more visible or put some more description/explanation of your service like you have described right in this post here! I think that would clear up what the purpose of your app is.
Also on the page of book listings you may want to make each "book row" clickable. Possibly put a subtle background on mouse over and when they click it sends them to the page to enter their email. This makes it a bit more user friendly instead of scanning right and finding the appropriate "Start reading now" link.
Great idea though, I can find this useful reading the email on my smartphone on my way to school!
[+] [-] dshipper|15 years ago|reply
[+] [-] agnesberthelot|15 years ago|reply
Agnes
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[+] [-] themagnus33|15 years ago|reply
Just a thought and gl!
Magnus
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