Ask HN: Is my landing page improved?

[patrickz]

After receiving many negative feedbacks for my focus app's landing page, I redesigned it. I revised the grammar errors, put some screenshots, and even built an interactive sound player to make it more interesting.

How is the landing page now? Is it better? Any problems that I might be missing?

Original HN post: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=30625797

Landing page: https://www.space4.cc

Thank you guys!

[garycomtois]

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