How to express my thoughts at 'technical' presentations

[sreeprasad]

Hi developers,

I have been requested for a technical presentation to startup team. I love this startup and am very very excited and eager to join this startup. I have done technical presentations at school but they are very verbose. Is that okay for presenting for at startup ? Can anyone please guide me

[kingoftheintern]

What do you think they care about? Tell them that. Verbose is almost definitely the wrong direction. You've given us almost no detail so I can't offer any more advice.